As always thank you for reading!! As far as plot goes, I'm happiest with this comic's plot so far... I'd had the idea stewing in my head for around a month, and finally made a comic about it... it's been a while since I've completed a comic so I'm happy... also, this one was much lass hassle cus I didn't plan it a ton ahead of time... as a result it's kind of messy but I think it's more my style of working, so I'm fine with it as long as I keep working and improving...